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Compelling characters, an intriguing plot and a thought-provoking theme are only half the battle in creating a powerful story. The fourth ingredient many new writers aren't aware of is the revelation sequence. The revelation sequence is a simple concept to grasp: It's the order in which you plan to reveal the 'shocking truths' about the plot and characters. We all have an intuitive feel for how to reveal these key moments, and even new writers know to leave the most shocking reveals until later in the story. But consciously considering when you reveal these truths is an easy trick to power up your story. How To Power Up Your Story Separating your revelation sequence from your plot and character notes is the key to powering up your story and taking it to the next level. Separating your revelation sequence from everything else allows you to objectively see how you could make your story more dramatic and increase the conflict, making it a more exciting and compelling read. In his

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